It can be instinctive to paint the best picture of yourself possible in your essay, but put aside vanity and pride for a moment.
You’ve already spent the rest of your college application flourishing your immaculate GPA, club leadership, and volunteer work.
An essay that stands out is simply more memorable,” says Quartz growth editor Jean-Luc Bouchard.
“I wrote a series of thematically linked poems for my admissions essay, and even though the poems were probably pretty bad, I think I got points just for trying something different.”You may recall the news this spring about Ziad Ahmed, a student who got into Stanford by writing “#Black Lives Matter” a hundred times on one of his essay prompts.
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Although we had already learned about Jerry’s enthusiasm for debate in other parts of his application, this essay gave so much more depth into why this activity is meaningful for him.Here’s a brutal truth about applying to college: On paper, most teenagers are not very unique.Some three million high school graduates send applications into universities every single year, and that’s just within the United States.is never the same as a.m.” He goes on to explain how he and his relatives were accidentally separated on the trip, walking the reader through the challenges he faced on his way back to safety, and ending on a tone of humility and lesson-learning.Good essays don’t all need to hype up an applicant’s superpowers: They can expose weaknesses, demonstrating subtlety and self-awareness.Such ventures may come off as gimmicky—and we certainly wouldn’t recommend anyone repeating this exact idea in a future year—but they’re effective at one thing: grabbing the reader’s attention.Ziad, who had interned for Hilary Clinton and was recognized by Barack Obama at a White House dinner in 2015, was already more than qualified. Ask a teacher, friend, parent, or counselor to read it over—then ask five more people to do the same.What his essay did was make admissions officers pause in their tracks for a moment, and peer a tad more closely at the rest of his application. Think of it not as an essay in the academic sense, but an unlined blank canvas you can use to present whatever you want. Admissions officers barrel through dozens of essays a day, and the rote tedium of it can cause them to be hyper-critical of even the smallest of typos and grammatical errors.Show them this small respect, and you’ve already beat out many others kids for that coveted acceptance letter.When it comes to the college essay, taking a risk—however small or big—is better than playing it safe.Try writing different versions of your essay, maybe in completely different formats, just to see if one of them resonates more than the others.“Admissions officers have to read so many essays that physically look the same.